Constructive criticism for my poem, please?

I like it. It wasn't over-played. You didn't make it about the girl being self-consumed by her own depression. It was like an explanation of why/how she became what she is. Your wording was great. I like the lines "alive and healthy swiftly veered to alive and hurting." your ending was cliche though to blatant to represent death. It leaves no desire of curiosity. It's just over. U might want to make it more spiritual.