B&A: Read This Poem? I'm Curious...?

I think this shows tremendous potential, A solid grasp of language and a natural ability to communicate your thoughts with rhyme. No consistent meter, so it would be free verse. My only other observation is that it feels a bit over-dramatized. Maybe a bit too much trying to sound poetic rather than being true to your heart. Have you posted anything more recently written? I'd be curious to see what eight years of growth looks like...