Thursday, August 4, 2011

Help with my blurb for my story?

Hey, the blurb sounds really good. It reveals just enough to make the reader interested without giving it all away. Possibly leave out the 'six-years-old' bit because it is a little too much information for the first line and makes it muddled. You could add this detail in a bit later on or just leave it out all together because it isn't essential. Your book sounds amazing, good luck!

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